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Whether you are about to query literary agents or plan to query publishers that accept manuscripts without agent representation, you want to craft the strongest fiction or nonfiction query letter possible. Depending on the literary

agent or editor, dozens of query letters can be received each week. Some editors and agents I know receive

more than 50 per week! 

What does this mean for you? Given the numbers of queries sent each week to publishing professionals, only a short amount of time can be allocated to each one. This means you will want to send a powerful, concise, and attention-grabbing query that will get your story noticed right away. 

Who needs this service? A query letter critique is ideal for anyone about to begin initial submissions to agents or editors.  This service is also ideal for anyone who has been querying  but has not received responses, has been given feedback that the query needs work, or has received numerous rejections. 

Ultimately, this service is ideal for any writer who wants to sell their book - fiction or nonfiction - and wants to ensure the strongest query letter possible will be sent to editors. 


  • Thorough review and evaluation of your query letter.

  • Suggested edits and/or structural and content changes.

  • Feedback provided during a 30 min Zoom call (highly recommended, so you can ask questions), or via email/Word document. And extra 30 min Zoom option (60 minutes total) is available for an extra $29.

  • Please note, if you choose to have feedback via a Zoom call, I need a minimum of 5 business days to review your material before our meeting. 

  • After ordering, please send your query letter to: using Query Critique Submission in the subject line. 







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